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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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1: I understand that it is a stylized character, so nobody's expecting realistic anatomy - however, Valeria's legs feel a bit too long in comparison to her upper body. If it's a perspective thing, then it isn't *quite* reading.
2: I also can see you wanted us to focus on the characters but the environment that is in the foreground (the ledge just behind Valeria) would probably benefit from a little more detail and crispness - this'll help give the piece more depth (the mountains and such in the background don't need anything because of how far away they are).
All in all, really fun character design, great attitude. Keep it up!
And I agree about the ledge, I'm working on cartooning the backgrounds further to better relate to the cartoon characters.
Thanks for the critique
I've never seen that before.
But I gotta admit that I got distracted (as always...) by the cute girl
Still, they're both really good character designs